Is "We See" Bad Writing?
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 Published On Sep 27, 2023

Is it okay to use "We See" or "We Hear" in screenwriting?

Many a writer has asked this innocent question, only to be pilloried, chased off of Twitter, or driven - screaming - from the hallowed halls of Reddit.

So where does Stokes stand on this volcanic issue? And why is it so controversial anyway? In this video, I jump up and down on this landmine, and try to steel-man both sides. Wish me luck!

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"Easy Stroll" by TrackTribe
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"Gaiety in the Golden Age" by Aaron Kenny
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"Panama Hat" by Audionautix
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