The gist of it is that I think often times we can get hung up on 'critiques' which are not really critiques. If we say something is a 'self-insert' what we are usually saying is that the character feels as if they are out of place and do not belong in their world. Also that they seem to have too many things in common with the writer and that they get special treatment in the story. Without these aspects, however, a self insert does not really indicate a bad character or bad writing. It's a net neutral, and just like anything else in writing it is a tool to be used if you choose to do so. However, it is a tool which should be wielded properly.

Royal Road Referral Link: https://royalroad.com/signup/RR-9E58-...

My Book: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/566...

Artist who drew my stills: https://browserpowder.carrd.co

Editor: https://www.fiverr.com/bumis23?source...