Hellow hoomans,
This is a short song I recently wrote.
And I shot this from my mobile vertically, lwal.
I hope you like it.

Lyrics:

महसूस गराउ न तिम्रा
मनका भावनाहरु

नलुकाई राखन तिम्रा
मनमा चाहानाहरु

तिम्रो आँखाभित्र को संसारमा
लैजाऊ न मलाई पनि
रम्न देउन तिम्रो आकाशमा
तिम्रो सप्तरंग बनी
देखाइदेउ न मलाई
के छ त्यो क्षितिज पारी
चुम्न देउन तिम्रो ओँठ
त्यो बादल माथि

Sorry that the video is this short.
And please provide me honest opinions and suggestions regarding the song in the comments. It'd be a great help. And if you have any queries or anything that I can help with do not hesitate on sliding into my DMs lol.
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