What would happen if Captain America started a different way?
Abbie Emmons Abbie Emmons
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 Published On Premiered Sep 15, 2021

Have you ever watched a movie and thought to yourself: that was really good, but you know what would have made it even better? That’s how I felt after watching Captain America: The First Avenger. In this video, we’re going to play with the structure of Captain America and see what happens when we cut, rearrange, and revise some of the most crucial moments in the film… will you end up caring more about the characters, with just a few simple changes?

This is Science of Story, where we come together to uncover the secret ingredients behind our favorite stories and learn how to use those ingredients to make our own writing unforgettable.

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✨T I M E S T A M P S✨

00:00 Introduction
01:11 The Hook Problem
05:46 Do we need the villain’s POV?
08:57 Is Steve Rogers a passive character?
12:20 The difference between omniscient and deep POV
15:29 Conclusion
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