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In this video, I’ll:
- Read you a personal statement that helped a student get accepted to a range of Ivies this past year, analyzing it as I go
- Share with you tips that can help you as you write your own
- AND at the end tell you where this student got in, where they didn’t, and how much money they were offered in scholarships

📍 Chapters
00:00 Introduction
00:30 Paragraph 1 + analysis
01:13 Paragraph 2 + analysis
02:31 Paragraph 3 + analysis
05:25 Paragraph 4 + analysis
10:05 Closing paragraph + analysis
11:35 Final thoughts

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