Watch my Force Awakens Rewrite Here:    • Rewriting The Force Awakens (and fixi...  

Anyway, this is a rewrite for all those who weren't that fond of the Last Jedi and would like to see a different take on it. It's building off my rewrite for the Force Awakens and of course there will be a forthcoming rewrite of The Rise of Skywalker, but I can't promise when that'll be. This video took longer than I expected.

DISCLAIMER: if you really hated every aspect of the Last Jedi, you aren't going to like this rewrite, because the point of this project is to use the Disney films as blueprints. I'm not claiming this is the perfect Star Wars film. It's simply the best I could come up with given the self-imposed constraints I was working under. I hope that even if you wouldn't enjoy this film as much as some other potential star wars films, you can at least appreciate the creative work in trying to make this film work slightly better.

Here are some chapters:

00:00 Introduction
3:36 Opening Action and Poe's Character
22:00 Pursuit and Luke's Character
30:09 Rey's Training and Canto Bight
40:00 Luke Tempted and Action Climax
53:44 Downer Ending and Ultimate Villain
01:10:43 Outro

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