In my experience, this is the most common mistake intermediate writers make, and it all comes back to the most basic piece of writing advice out there: show, don't tell. Show, don't tell is good advice...but there's another side of the equation that we never talk about.

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TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 - Intro
1:04 - Show, Don't Tell is incomplete advice
2:06 - What problems does this cause?
8:28 - Why does this happen?
11:43 - What is good telling?
14:41 - Good telling example (from Eileen)
18:41 - Closing thoughts

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